Hello! I'm not that familiar with comic strips, so I don't know if this is a thing people usually do - but I'm really enjoying your presentation of each individual frame!! I love how asymmetrically you've laid them out. Compositionally, it feels incredibly fresh and interesting. Your attention to detail really shines through; the fabric of Hermione's dress, the pair's expressions, the last shot - is that Pansy pulling down Hermione's bra!? And the hands!!! This has to be my favourite aspect of your artwork - your commitment to depicting their hands and portraying their touch! It's incredibly intimate: the hand slipping under a dress, a hand gripping the suncream, a zoomed in shot of their finger's intwined... It's all very filmic. And massive props to your technical drawing ability - hands are a TOTAL bitch to draw - well done!!! Mine always look like little sausages. You've drawn them very elegantly. Lovely lovely! Gorgeous fun colours - YAY TO SATURATION!! - it feels fresh and alive and I love it. Thank you anonymous!!