Poor, poor, Draco--doomed to torture by shirtless Potter...
I enjoyed this foray into the Amazon--total fun times. :D
And the art that accompanies the scene with the vines! It's beyond gorgeous. I ADORE how Draco's hair is a bit golden instead of platinum, and with a bit of wavynes in the humidity, rather than the slick-backed staple. So soft and sultry!
A couple times while reading I was just floored with how vividly your writing portrayed some of their emotions.
Draco paused, then swiped the liniment over the strong angles of Harry’s cheek bones, up to the corner of his eyes, and down the slope of his nose. He felt the slight bump in its descent—a flaw in the cartilage, a remnant of Draco’s cruel behaviour at a time when he should have known better, even as a child.
The Sectumsepra scar gets a lot of play, so I LOVE to see Draco's introspection re. Harry's nose and how he ought to have behaved in his youth.
“Even Voldemort can’t change the fact that you once experienced happiness in your home.”
This line is so profound. I hope that Draco takes it to heart and lets it act like a balm there. I just can't even begin to express how perfect and insightful this is!
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I enjoyed this foray into the Amazon--total fun times. :D
And the art that accompanies the scene with the vines! It's beyond gorgeous. I ADORE how Draco's hair is a bit golden instead of platinum, and with a bit of wavynes in the humidity, rather than the slick-backed staple. So soft and sultry!
A couple times while reading I was just floored with how vividly your writing portrayed some of their emotions.
Draco paused, then swiped the liniment over the strong angles of Harry’s cheek bones, up to the corner of his eyes, and down the slope of his nose. He felt the slight bump in its descent—a flaw in the cartilage, a remnant of Draco’s cruel behaviour at a time when he should have known better, even as a child.
The Sectumsepra scar gets a lot of play, so I LOVE to see Draco's introspection re. Harry's nose and how he ought to have behaved in his youth.
“Even Voldemort can’t change the fact that you once experienced happiness in your home.”
This line is so profound. I hope that Draco takes it to heart and lets it act like a balm there. I just can't even begin to express how perfect and insightful this is!
Thanks for sharing adventure time!