capitu: (Hufflepuff ~ fashion [default])
capitu ([personal profile] capitu) wrote in [community profile] hpdrizzle 2016-09-22 09:27 pm (UTC)

Ohh, that was super sweet!!!! I loved Oliver being distracted by Percy!

Scanning the crowd, he caught a flash of red hair. His immediate thought, even after all these years, was of his dormmate and not any of the four other Weasleys he had played Quidditch with. No he still thought of the one who stuck up his nose at muddy boots and messy potions essays.

I loved that description of him because it just sounds so fond, you know? Smitten!Oliver? Absolutely! :D

And the ending with the charm, I loved how it played with the weather. This was lovely. <3


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