http://sunshine-sundae.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sunshine-sundae.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hpdrizzle 2016-09-18 08:36 am (UTC)

Lovely. This pairing is definitely growing on me through this fest! I am very fond of Draco also, so I loved that you used him here too. I'd have been very surprised at what the pair of them did if I were Hermione! I also liked that you didn't go down the cliche comfort in person route, with Theo providing physical comfort. It was very like him - and very kind - of him to create a private space for Hermione and not pressure her into using it or demand gratitude.

You wrote Theo very well - his frankness, his awkwardness. I particularly enjoyed the story opening about the different places he, Draco and Pansy liked to go. It suited Theo's voice very well. Thanks for a lovely read!

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