http://azertykeynes.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] azertykeynes.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hpdrizzle 2016-10-14 04:40 am (UTC)

Great work!!

Hi! Thanks so much for writing my prompt. It made my day reading this!

This turned out much more serious than I expected, but I wouldn't have it any other way. I'm so glad things worked out for the best for Draco. He was so sweet especially in the end---you were making me swoon.

"What?!" Draco was so surprised he took off his chicken head. "Seriously? You're not playing with me, Granger?"

Hermione smiled and shook her head. "Seriously."


The complete turn around of Draco's disposition was endearing---like his world had suddenly gotten so much brighter. He's so afraid of getting hurt---afraid that Hermione's only being nice for a laugh, or worse, out of misplaced because then it would be so easy for her to forget about him afterwards. It's just very touching. I'm glad for the ending and the hope you painted on to it.

Very well done.

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