http://sunshine-sundae.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sunshine-sundae.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hpdrizzle 2016-09-08 07:10 pm (UTC)

Lovely. Their conversation felt very natural, twisting from light and teasing to intense and painful, then back again. Hermione's dad realising what she was going to do to him was a small part but, for some reason, particularly powerful for me. And those final lines are the best I've seen in a long time. Great job!

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